My First Destroyed Tiger

[Guest]

OMG Thanks guys... just pick apart my work.. i hate you all !!


No i'm joking. Thanks for all the advice. I will definitely take this into consideration and re-post once i have made some improvements.

[flyjoe180]

just pick apart my work.. i hate you all !!

Okay then Josh, it 'looks good' :P But seriously, I think all that's been said has been said, and it does look effective. Bearing in mind the previous comments, the smoke and burn effect you have achieved is convincing. Also it is nicely displayed.

[spanner570]

Josh, a suggestion for the base framework.....


Although it's very neat, it sort of hits you and sticks out. The wood is too pale and detracts from the rest of the mini dio. Look at the tank and although you are not looking directly at the frame, it still takes over from the centre piece. Can I suggest you either stain the wood a dark colour or even paint it a shade of brown or green?


Doing the above will keep the eye of the viewer where it should be - on your excellent Tiger.


Cheers,


Ron

[eddiesolo]

OMG Thanks guys... just pick apart my work.. i hate you all !!

[grumpa]

You asked for it , that's why I no longer really give advice or give a "critique" I know you're only kidding but some folks even though they say they want to hear it - they really don't


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[grumpa]

You asked for it , that's why I no longer really give advice or give a "critique" I know you're only kidding but some folks even though they say they want to hear it - they really don't . Here's some thing I did a while back [ATTACH]114435.IPB[/ATTACH]



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[eddiesolo]

some folks even though they say they want to hear it - they really don't

True, I have some great feedback and that is how it should be.

[Guest]

True, I have some great feedback and that is how it should be.

I totally agree guys. Personally i think criticism is part of the package. I personally don't see people as 'slating' my work i see it as helpful guidance from those who have been where i have been.


After all, who wants to spend loads of money on kits and not make them the best they can be