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  • Alan 45
    • Nov 2012
    • 9833

    #1

    Old slate roof

    I've been working on an old ruin the last week and I've just finished the roof I think it looks ok but there's something about it I can't put my finger on it so I thought I'd throw it out there and see if anyone can see what's there or not


    Here's a picture [ATTACH]118138.IPB[/ATTACH]


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    #2
    Bit of moss perhaps? And it you really want to be pernickety, some rusty nail heads would deffo be in attendance!

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    • papa 695
      Moderator
      • May 2011
      • 22770

      #3
      I think it just looks too clean Alan, once it's weathered it should look great, and plenty of rubble on the floor.

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      • Alan 45
        • Nov 2012
        • 9833

        #4
        I was thinking about moss and I do have some fine powder I could use then give it a wash of green but I'll try that on a bit of plasticard first to see if it looks ok


        The nail idea I did toy with but I thought the colour of the roof would camouflage it


        Thanks for you input

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        • spanner570
          SMF Supporters
          • May 2009
          • 15402

          #5
          Alan, the ones on their own on the top look as though they are in mid air, so to speak, and should have slid off.


          To be totally slate/tile rivet counting, the overlaps should be far more than you have shown, round about 1/2 to 1/3 of the tiles should be covered by the one on top of it.


          The weathering looks fine to me.

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          • Guest

            #6
            I forgot how much you want for the 110...ops: will pay as soon as I know!!

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            • Alan 45
              • Nov 2012
              • 9833

              #7
              Originally posted by \
              Alan, the ones on their own on the top look as though they are in mid air, so to speak, and should have slid off.
              To be totally slate/tile rivet counting, the overlaps should be far more than you have shown, around half the tiles should be covered by the one on top of it.


              The weathering looks fine to me.
              It's a kit mate I didn't make it so I can't do anything about that

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              • Guest

                #8
                I think maybe the dark between the slates is too dark, or maybe too wide, other than that it looks good to me.

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                • Alan 45
                  • Nov 2012
                  • 9833

                  #9
                  Originally posted by \
                  I think it just looks too clean Alan, once it's weathered it should look great, and plenty of rubble on the floor.
                  Give ma a chance mate it's not on the base yet


                  The base will have all the rubble, I have to scratch some roof pieces and put bits of other timber lying around

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                  • Alan 45
                    • Nov 2012
                    • 9833

                    #10
                    Originally posted by \
                    I think maybe the dark between the slates is too dark, or maybe too wide, other than that it looks good to me.
                    Cheers Ken that's just the photo angle I shot , it's not that dark in real view

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                    • PaulTRose
                      SMF Supporters
                      • Jun 2013
                      • 6460
                      • Paul
                      • Tattooine

                      #11
                      looks fine to me, better than i could do thats for sure
                      Per Ardua

                      We'll ride the spiral to the end and may just go where no ones been

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                      • tr1ckey66
                        SMF Supporters
                        • Mar 2009
                        • 3592

                        #12
                        Hi Alan


                        I think your ruined building looks very good. The technique is very well applied but for me I think the slates are the wrong colour. Aren't slates... well, slate grey? It's true they can be stained red with rust but where's the rust coming from? If it were me I'd reverse the colours - make the slates a base of dark grey, dry brush with light grey (for the edges/broken parts) and then add the staining. Red for the rust from nails and green slimy stuff for moss etc. I may even put in the odd subtle blueish stain.


                        Like I said the technique is faultless for me the slates are the wrong colour.


                        Looks very good by-the-way


                        Cheers


                        P

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                        • Alan 45
                          • Nov 2012
                          • 9833

                          #13
                          Originally posted by \
                          Hi Alan
                          I think your ruined building looks very good. The technique is very well applied but for me I think the slates are the wrong colour. Are'nt slates... well, slate grey? It's true they can be stained red with rust but where's the rust coming from. If it were me I'd reverse the colours - make the slates a base of dark grey, dry brush with light grey (for the edges/broken parts) and then add the staining. Red for the rust from nails and green slimy stuff for moss etc. I may even put in the odd subtle blueish stain.


                          Like I said the technique is faultless for me the slates are the wrong colour.


                          Looks very good by-the-way


                          Cheers


                          P
                          Cheers Paul , it's a wrong wording on my part , the roof tiles are quite thick so I painted them as the brick type you can get hence the red brown colour


                          The dark patches are green they just haven't shown up very well , maybe due to the dark colour underneath

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                          • tr1ckey66
                            SMF Supporters
                            • Mar 2009
                            • 3592

                            #14
                            Cheers Paul , it's a wrong wording on my part , the roof tiles are quite thick so I painted them as the brick type you can get hence the red brown colour
                            Ah, 'Old Ceramic Tiled Roof'. Well, then i think they're fine. You could continue to add detail - moss etc but essentially they're in a good place.


                            Cheers


                            P

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                            • Alan 45
                              • Nov 2012
                              • 9833

                              #15
                              Originally posted by \
                              Ah, 'Old Ceramic Tiled Roof'. Well, then i think they're fine. You could continue to add detail - moss etc but essentially they're in a good place.
                              Cheers


                              P
                              That's the word I was looking for , ceramic, cheers Paul , thanks for your input

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